Practice Hard News Story- “Grief, Remorse, Tears”

Hi readers!

In class this week, we read through scenarios where journalists were unethical in their work.

Here are the two cases we looked at:

We were told to re-write the intro to both of those articles.

Here is my attempt:

Tara Cosoleto                                                                       Mildura, Car crash, court report


The 34-year-old driver involved in the Mildura crash was charged yesterday morning with six counts of culpable driving causing death.

Tara Cosoleto                                                                Darcey Freeman, emergency services


Emergency service workers are being counselled tonight after they were unable to prevent the death of a 4-year-old girl at the West Gate Bridge this morning.


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