Practice Hard News Story- “Grief, Remorse, Tears”

Hi readers!

In class this week, we read through scenarios where journalists were unethical in their work.

Here are the two cases we looked at:

We were told to re-write the intro to both of those articles.

Here is my attempt:


Tara Cosoleto                                                                       Mildura, Car crash, court report

28/9/15

The 34-year-old driver involved in the Mildura crash was charged yesterday morning with six counts of culpable driving causing death.


Tara Cosoleto                                                                Darcey Freeman, emergency services

28/9/15

Emergency service workers are being counselled tonight after they were unable to prevent the death of a 4-year-old girl at the West Gate Bridge this morning.

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